Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Bad Poetry

It used to be that when I was so upset or emotionally  off my rocker I write very bad poetry. It has been a long long time since I have done this. Unfortunately I had "need' to do this in the past few days. So Since I didn't write other stuff I thought I torture my readers  here.

Sorry


I am curled up on the lumpy mattress
The soft warmth of the flannel sheets
Have little to warm me up

My insides are knotted and strained
The Locomotive of my brain cannot stop
My emotions pour out in rivers from my eyes
on to the bare pillow

Too angry to sleep
fighting the feeling
That wants to let  in Defeat
I am not Done
There is too much at stake.

I don’t want to do this alone.

2 comments:

  1. Not so bad. But maybe it helps to know at least part of the back story. Do let me know how the next stanza goes.

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  2. Maybe you should see some of my college poetry. Some is pretty bad some is OK.

    may be I should rewrite some for this....

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