*OK I have resigned my self that I may not like everything I write. This is a case in point*
Holly walks into the room carrying a very blue box of cereal.
“Hey” Interjects Bill “thats my cereal!”
She turns and looks at him and meeting his blue eyes with her equally blue eyes the exhaustion from swimming takes over and she turns and flees the room. Tossing the box of BooBerry Crunch at her father.
“You can some if you ask.” Bill calls after her. Sitting next to me on the couch he chokes of a chuckle as her mood change dawns on him.
“I think I have really upset her” he says to me as he gets to his feet and follows her.
He comes back with a sigh and flops on to the couch.
“Yeah I upset her.” he says rubbing his hands on his blue jeans. His blue eyes full of resignation and self disappointment. “At least now you have something to write for Blue”
Friday, October 30, 2009
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It's cute Vicki!
ReplyDeleteNot a bad piece at all and lots of potential to build on this! Come back to it later this month and use it to write a short story. You've set the opening, now run with it.