Friday, November 13, 2009

Ninjas 3

*Ok I have started from the last line of yesterday.  Sorry for the funny typo*

Sitting on the other side of the room was a hunched figure in a black robe.

The figure’s face was down long dark hair hung forward hiding it’s face. The Black rob covered everything else. The figure swayed with the movement of the room. But did not stir from it’s position.

Unwinding her skirt from her knees she carefully sat up and adjusted he clothing for modesty and comfort. For warmth she tucked her feet under her, her corset was a different matter she could not completely adjust it without help and she would not ask a stranger She maybe able to take it off if she was alone. It took a lot to sit upright. Her seemingly minor injuries had begun to abate in pain and her head was only aching no longer a fierce pain. He mouth felt like she had been chewing on sheep’s  wool. She needed to get something to eat.

Surveying the room there was two cots with yellowed covering the one she sat on and the one the other did. A door that was shut and bolted on this side. A small chest with a wooden jar was against the wall opposite the door. A small dirty mirror was bolted to the wall above it. The ceiling was low and as dirty as the walls. She could see a small case under her roommates cot.

The pitching of the room was rhythmic and she was getting used to it. She decided to investigate a bit more she leaned forward to look under her cot. The movement sent her sliding, and she pitched off the cot into the small floor space. He feet and knees remained on the cot and her arms slid beneath it, her skirt flipped over her head. She let out a louder than intentioned gasp as her cheek hit the floor.

A small girlish giggle came from some where above her.

“So you awake now?” came an unexpected very accented feminine voice.

* I may need help on writing a very stylized and stereotyped Japanese accent*

1 comment:

  1. I don't know if I can help with stylized voice, but willing to try if you send me some practice sentences or thoughts.

    I'm interested in what will happen. Still curious as to why she was taken in the first place.

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