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Ungracefully Jane flops fully to the floor tossing her skirts back behind her and her feet and legs under her. She sits up on the floor and looks at the figure who has spoken.
The woman, as that is apparent that figure is, has long straight black hair. parted in the middle. Her skin has a almond-copper tone to it. Her eyes are almond shaped and dark almost disappearing in her mirth. Her eyelashes are dark, thick and short. her face as a whole is more flat than Jane had ever seen before. She is very beautiful and her small mouth was smiling with mirth Jane expected was at her expense.
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Because it is such a short piece, the repetition of mirth and almond really stood out. Other than that, no real thoughts.
ReplyDeleteYeah but I was too tiered to use a thesaurus or think for myself.
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