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Cold saturated toes
Painful pricking like ice
Encased in socks and fur
Help only comes in electric heat
Vinyl encased wire woven rectangle
Glowing orange light
Shows LO MED HI
Brings the promise of warm relief
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This is fun. I didn't care for the second line. Wanted the painful pricking to be more like knives or something else that has a continuous understanding among everyone.
ReplyDeleteI had 2 different lines for the second line as I deleted the other one I though I should just cross it out so I can see it again and now I have forgotten what it was. This was the original line and Holly and I though the other was weaker. I wish I could remember it to tell you what it was.
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