Saturday, February 20, 2010

The little muses out side my window made me write

6:19
Dark
Morning
February 20th
I’d Prefer to be asleep
Promises of cold and ice reach my brain
Sounds of a snow plow.

Amazingly another sound
Bright and cheerful
A calling
Chuuurp Chuuurp cheep cheep cheep
A morning song
Life and bright a promise of brighter warmer days to come.

2 comments:

  1. Very, very nice. I like this one a lot. Oddly, I think the first stanza is the better of the two. Both are very good though.

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  2. I couldn't at 6:30 in the morning make them flow right. I actually agree.

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